Comments on: The First Time http://www.thesoapboxers.com/the-first-time/ A web magazine that covers a world of topics every week. New articles published daily. Wed, 08 Feb 2012 13:14:40 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: kosmohttp://www.thesoapboxers.com/the-first-time/comment-page-1/#comment-898 kosmo Sun, 04 Oct 2009 02:09:26 +0000 http://www.thesoapboxers.com/?p=2020#comment-898 :)You caught me. I rewrote that bit at the last moment and didn't give it as much thought as I should have.I'll fully refund the cost of the story :) :)

You caught me. I rewrote that bit at the last moment and didn’t give it as much thought as I should have.

I’ll fully refund the cost of the story :)
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]]> By: Pattihttp://www.thesoapboxers.com/the-first-time/comment-page-1/#comment-894 Patti Sat, 03 Oct 2009 17:30:22 +0000 http://www.thesoapboxers.com/?p=2020#comment-894 Two things jumped out at me. First, that Beth was an attractive brunette. Second, that the replacement blouse she wore to eat spaghetti and meatballs was white.Shouldn't Beth have been an attractive blonde??? Two things jumped out at me. First, that Beth was an attractive brunette. Second, that the replacement blouse she wore to eat spaghetti and meatballs was white.

Shouldn’t Beth have been an attractive blonde???
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